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the elm trees the started a surprise visit and story

ANOTHER EVENING AT NORTH DAM PARK

Again we started later than we should have for our daily evening walk at  North Dam Park. but boy did we receive a surprise from nature! We witnessed quite a tale…

A Surprise

Yellow fluttering of autumn leaves
on elm and locust trees
added a dazzling, yet delicate charm
to our daily evening walk
when from behind and just above us
and through the branches,
a dark shape with long wings
slipped past the tree ahead,
turning into the sun
so its head shone white

“An eagle?”

The bird rose up again, high above,
its midnight blackness
shimmering in sun’s brightness
its croaking a low gurgle—

“Raven!”

A soft whoosh blew by,
just above our heads—
a mottled full-body
flapping soundless
below an elm’s branch—

“an owl?”

and on up to land in another
hidden by shadowed branches
and still quivering golden leaves
followed by a second raven: “Caw”
Both ravens dove in
grabbing with grey feet
the elm’s branches—
three birds hidden
in the drab limbs of sunset—
raven, wings in kerfuffle,
springing and cawing
closer and closer
to—

“Yes— Great Horned Owl”

Great Horned Owl with evening sunshine on its face while fearing for the two ravens mobbing it

Its face highlighted by sunset’s
shining rays between the elm’s leaves
Its face turning and listening
eyes wider and more bold
turning and listening


as angry guttural caws
command, “Leave! Leave!”
And so Owl fell in a swoop
in front of us,
seemingly floating away,
the ravens swift to the chase,

“A mobbing”

we witnessed
as we watched with wonder
though all had vanished past
the yellow fluttering of autumn leaves
on elm and locust trees.#writeout
Sheri Edwards
Photography/Poetry
10.18.24

WATCH THE RETELLING, WITH INCLUDED VIDEO OF LAST TWO PARTS:

You may want to pause to read the poem embedded with the images and videos.

RESOURCES FOR NATURE’S SURPRISE

We learned quite a bit about ravens, owls, and mobbing. Take a look:

Note: our area has few crows, but pairs of ravens are found everywhere in our area.


JOIN IN!

This post is part of the October WRITEOUT adventure, October 13 through the 27th, partnership of the National Writing Project and the National Park Service — a chance to enjoy the outdoors with poetry, prose, and parks for Write Out 2024. Organized as a public invitation to get out and create, supported by a series of free online activities, Write Out invites educators, students, and families to explore national parks and other public spaces. The goal is to connect and learn through place-based writing and sharing.  Check out this infographic for the flow of the this week and the Choice Board to get you started for WriteOut’s Poetry for the Planet.

Learn more and sign up: https://writeout.nwp.org

This is my seventh year with WriteOut with all my WriteOut posts here.


Cross post at What Else: WriteOut Surprise

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